Thriller Opening Ideas
Continuity Task
Person A walks up to a door
Handle is opened / pulled
Shot of person A walking through the door
Shot of person B sat down
Shot of person A sitting down next to them.
Shot of person A asking person B if they are ok?
Reverse shot (CU) of person B replying?
Two shot of person A and B – person B asks person A a question
Shot of person A’s reaction and answer
Shot of person B’s response.
This may be reapeated and varied as conversation develops – think
carefully about this part. The scripting is important here!
Shot of person A getting up.
Shot of person A walking away.
Shot of Person B. Person A exits through same door as entrance.
Through script editing, we made the conversation between the two people have a element of comedy, and I acted in it with a friend from another group, while Shawnee Rogers filmed the extract. The piece was filmed in the library (LRC) in our school.
Below is the copy of the Storyboard.
Addition to Continuity task.
We went out to film our continuity task, Me and my partner Shawnee were missing our third partner Lewis, so we were forced to rescript and improvise, using our brainstorm, we mocked up our location what ended up being the LRC (library) this location worked great with our filming, due to a art being shown at the time, borders blocked of certain parts, and the place was near desolate helping us dramatically with blocking exhibition g out external public sound. The place also had a great set of props, to use. With a missing member, we needed an additional actor, so we used a friend. Trying to use a extensive use of panning, and effective shots such as looking down, we filmed our piece with great ease. Shawnee on the camera, and me coordinating shots and acting, and our friend acting as well. Through this, i really understood the roles and positions within filming, and really gave me alot of experience to all together help with our final piece.
Addition to Continuity task.
After the filming process, we proceeded with editing our piece, with all our raw footage, we put into the Adobe Premiere program and dragged them into the right positions and cut clips down to size, and edited them in right positions to give a good continuity within our extract, the editing process did not take as long as i expected, and really taught me further into our the program works, allowing me to considerably help with the editing process with our final piece.
Addition to Continuity task.
The whole classes work was submitted, and we watched through each one twice, with this we were asked to examine their work, and present down points and up points about each person task, to really give each group the understanding of peer scrutiny, and with a little bit of competitively within our class, people were alot more tough on your work. Our teacher, took our comments into order, and placed a few of his own, and graded each persons work.
Our work is as follows.
Positives
We included a variety of different shots, camera angles and movements in our continuity film which were each very effective.
Long shots
Close ups
Mid shots
low angle
Tracking
Tilting
An over the shoulder view
Our teacher claimed that the sound was good, apart from times when the background noise of people got a little too much, and that framing was good, except a shot when a person walked into the room.
Negatives
Broke 180 ° rule
Different errors that need to be looked out for, the ending when you hear a loud voice in the background that should of been edited out.
Editing choice/ position of shots - needed to be more carefully thought- (TI)
Our marks ended up being a level 2, and we were graded 24 out of ** This ended up being the highest graded piece of work in the class.
I was very pleased with our piece, and learnt a significant amount from the criticism and the experience, Although we broke the 180* rule, i believe this mishap will spur us on to not to break it next time. With sound being a issue, I believe i will not only see when filming but also hear, what seemed to be a issue during the continuity task when we were filming. Mise-en-Scene will be a large factor wen filming, understanding that props are important and really create a film now, especially with things such as color, the very things that we examine when watching other films. And finally i will take into mind light and how it affects a piece of cinematography, when filming next. I am also very pleased with being the highest graded group, and this only spurs me onwards to create a great piece of work, rather than making me complacent.
Mise-en-scene: The audience is presented with a black cat, sauntering through what looks like construction yard, the black cat represents mystery, and its confident strut keeps the audience guessing its motive and use. The cat wanders through a concrete tube, where it is partially hidden, making the cat seem more important that needing to be constantly on the camera, it then continues to weave through fences showing the audience that it can pass through any barrier, and is not bound by them what-so-ever giving it a rebellious streak, and creating more mystery. Thus in turn creating a element of suspense. Then cat is eventually met by a white cat, and this ends up in a clash, the opposing colors create a sense of binary opposition, and a basic struggle against good and evil iconic in the thriller genre.
Titles: The titles appear in standard serif font, and also capitalized. The black titles clashing against the white background, shows binary opposition.
Editing: The camera tracks the cat majority of the scene, and the pace of the sequence is slow paced. But this pace eventually speeds up when the fight sequence starts. And the panning stops, and transforms into close up shots of the cat's in fight.
Sound: A smooth non diegetic soundtrack is heard throughout the whole of the extract, the interchanging types of music interact with the scene as a whole, but gives it a light but slick theme. The music does intensify into fast passed tension building styles, when the fight scene commences.
Camera: The cat is majority of the time, in constant close up shots throughout the tracking, the camera is slightly tilted in some shots, giving the cat a stronger presence, and authority. And empowerment. The cat is shown in a birds eye view, and extreme close ups are evident when the fight scene is in progress, to give it more messiness and confusion.
Initial ideas
Camera Practise
We were given a tri-pod and video camera, and tasked to complete a variety of different shots to give us a greater understanding of how the video camera works and how to set ourselves up for our continuity task, and eventually our final task. The shots we were asked to complete were..
Camera Angles: High Angle, low angle
Movements: Panning, Tilting, Zoom in, Zoom out
Shots: long shot, mid shot, close up, extreme close up, worms eye view, birds eye view.
This activity greatly improved my understanding of the camera's capability and uses and has greatly increased my confidence with using it, especially as my continuity task is not long away from filming.
The British Board of Film Classification is an independent, non-governmental body, which has classified cinema films since it was set up in 1912, and videos since the passing of the Video Recordings Act in 1984. (www.bbfc.co.uk)
The BBFC sets the age limit of diffrent films such as 18 (Seen on Hostel) 15 (Seen on I am Legend) 12 (Seen on Bourne Identity) PG (Seen Monsters inc) U (Seen on Cinderella)
15:
15 rated certificate tend to allow moderate violence, gore and sexual activity. However not in explicit circumstances and it must be of relevance. Drug taking is not banned however it cannot be promoted to be seen in a positive way.
18:
18 rated certificates permit a wide range of gore, violence, sexual activity and drug taking (not to be promoted.) The difference between the two certificates lies not in context of themes; mainly in explicity.
http://www.bbfc.co.uk/downloads/pub/Guidelines/BBFC%20Classification%20Guidelines%202009.pdf
(The BBFC guideline PDF document)